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Tuesday 18 November 2014

Writing W6 T4

Hi today me and my class room 4 did some writing it was really fun.I really liked my work and the picture I hope you like it to.Please leave a comment.

1 comments:

Unknown said...

Hi Kalo, I loved the sentence 'As I stretch I can feel the slimy dirt rubbing against my paws'. I feel like I'm a tiger, stretching out and running as fast as I can towards my prey. Keep up the good work.

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