Cycle of honey

WALT write a explanation about the making of honey.

Explanation writing practice

WALT practice our paragraphs for our explanation writing test.
We were writing paragraphs so that we could get our self ready for our writing test. I was in a group with cerenity, lizzy and aja. I had a lot of fun working with them because they were very encouraging when someone didn't get something. When everyone was finished writing their paragraphs we put it all together and made an explanation about developing manaakitanga. I hope you liked our paragraph and maybe you could leave me some feedback or feedforward.