New ideas that I was thinking of were what I could of added and how to make it more interesting. I enjoyed my time at Kiwi can on Tuesday. I found playing outside challenging because for me it was really cold. I was interested in this activity because I could enjoy it with my friends. Next time I think I can work on making it stand out more and describing more. I hope you enjoy my work and leave me some feedback and feedforward for me to look back on.
Wednesday, 30 November 2016
Kiwican Reflection
WALT write a reflection about our time at Kiwi can on Tuesday.
New ideas that I was thinking of were what I could of added and how to make it more interesting. I enjoyed my time at Kiwi can on Tuesday. I found playing outside challenging because for me it was really cold. I was interested in this activity because I could enjoy it with my friends. Next time I think I can work on making it stand out more and describing more. I hope you enjoy my work and leave me some feedback and feedforward for me to look back on.
New ideas that I was thinking of were what I could of added and how to make it more interesting. I enjoyed my time at Kiwi can on Tuesday. I found playing outside challenging because for me it was really cold. I was interested in this activity because I could enjoy it with my friends. Next time I think I can work on making it stand out more and describing more. I hope you enjoy my work and leave me some feedback and feedforward for me to look back on.
Monday, 28 November 2016
N.Z Herald Reflection
WALT write a reflection about an article from the New Zealand Herald.
Hi today I will be talking about what article I read while on the New Zealand Herald. New Ideas that I found were new articles and new people writing on the N.Z Herald. I enjoyed writing picking the colours for my title and putting my work in that order. What I found difficult was trying not to repeat myself while I was typing. I think my next steps are going to be trying to put more descriptive words and try to explain more about what the author was trying to say in his opinion piece. I was interested in this article because It had something to do with the country I am living in. I hope you enjoyed my reflection and leave me some feedback and feedforward to look back on.
Hi today I will be talking about what article I read while on the New Zealand Herald. New Ideas that I found were new articles and new people writing on the N.Z Herald. I enjoyed writing picking the colours for my title and putting my work in that order. What I found difficult was trying not to repeat myself while I was typing. I think my next steps are going to be trying to put more descriptive words and try to explain more about what the author was trying to say in his opinion piece. I was interested in this article because It had something to do with the country I am living in. I hope you enjoyed my reflection and leave me some feedback and feedforward to look back on.
Weekend Reflection
WALT write a reflection about our weekend.
Hi today I will be talking about what I did on the weekend. New ideas that I put in my work were putting the day in the beginning so that the audience who is reading knows what that paragraph is about. I enjoyed doing word art and what I found challenging was trying to make it interesting but still trying to put as much information as I could. I think that my next steps are to try and make my DLO stand out more. I was interested in this task because it was something I could complete and it was fun. I hope you enjoyed reading my reflection and leave me some feedback and feedforward for me to look back and reflect on.
Hi today I will be talking about what I did on the weekend. New ideas that I put in my work were putting the day in the beginning so that the audience who is reading knows what that paragraph is about. I enjoyed doing word art and what I found challenging was trying to make it interesting but still trying to put as much information as I could. I think that my next steps are to try and make my DLO stand out more. I was interested in this task because it was something I could complete and it was fun. I hope you enjoyed reading my reflection and leave me some feedback and feedforward for me to look back and reflect on.
From Monday to Friday
WALT write a reflection about what I did while I wasn't at school.
Hi today I will be talking about what I did while I wasn't at school last week. New ideas that I found while writing my reflection were what I can do next time with the length of the box so that it makes everything fit and what I can do with the text to make it stand out. I enjoyed writing my work in paragraphs but I kept getting confused about what I did on different days. I think my next steps are trying to put more detail into each paragraph and explain more in detail. I was interested in doing this because it was something that I already knew about so it wouldn't be that difficult to write about. I put my writing in paragraphs and in each paragraph I have written about what I did on each day. I tried to put as much information into this as I could and I hope you enjoy my work and leave some feedback and feedforward for me to look back at.
Hi today I will be talking about what I did while I wasn't at school last week. New ideas that I found while writing my reflection were what I can do next time with the length of the box so that it makes everything fit and what I can do with the text to make it stand out. I enjoyed writing my work in paragraphs but I kept getting confused about what I did on different days. I think my next steps are trying to put more detail into each paragraph and explain more in detail. I was interested in doing this because it was something that I already knew about so it wouldn't be that difficult to write about. I put my writing in paragraphs and in each paragraph I have written about what I did on each day. I tried to put as much information into this as I could and I hope you enjoy my work and leave some feedback and feedforward for me to look back at.
Wednesday, 9 November 2016
Manaiakalani reflection
WALT write a reflection about the Manaiakalani festival.
New ideas that I found were what schools videos were in the films and whose films from my school were going in the film. I enjoyed watching the films with my buddy. I was very interested in the films and my favourite film was from our school and it was called choices. If you want to check it out click Here. I hope you enjoy my blog post for today and leave me some feedforward and some feedback.
New ideas that I found were what schools videos were in the films and whose films from my school were going in the film. I enjoyed watching the films with my buddy. I was very interested in the films and my favourite film was from our school and it was called choices. If you want to check it out click Here. I hope you enjoy my blog post for today and leave me some feedforward and some feedback.
This is my reflection about the film festival.
This is a photo from the video choices.
Braking the world record
WALT write about an article from the random section.
I learnt some new things while reading this article like who did it, what record they broke and what they looked like. I enjoyed writing about this article because it sounds random and wacky. I thought that the article was interesting so I thought you might want to read it, Kiwikidsnews. I hope you enjoy my work and leave me some feedforward and some feedback.
I learnt some new things while reading this article like who did it, what record they broke and what they looked like. I enjoyed writing about this article because it sounds random and wacky. I thought that the article was interesting so I thought you might want to read it, Kiwikidsnews. I hope you enjoy my work and leave me some feedforward and some feedback.
Tuesday, 8 November 2016
Diwali festival
WALT write about an article from the world section.
Today I am going to be blogging about an article about the Diwali festival. I enjoyed reading thru the article. I found some things in this article that I didn't know like India is the 11th most polluted city in the world. I think that my next steps are to try and describe my reflection more. I hope you enjoyed my reflection and leave me some feedforward and feedback for me.
Today I am going to be blogging about an article about the Diwali festival. I enjoyed reading thru the article. I found some things in this article that I didn't know like India is the 11th most polluted city in the world. I think that my next steps are to try and describe my reflection more. I hope you enjoyed my reflection and leave me some feedforward and feedback for me.
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